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darkerthandark, February 15th, 2015, 11:27 am ( Reply )

- Someone's getting angry.

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posted by LouLouBaBa on February 16th, 2015, 9:08 am

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I wonder if this fellow is doing this from fear or in hope that he will get noticed by our multi colored gal. Enjoying the story, and a minor criticism ahead, please dont read if your not looking for them.

hmm, same thing with the last page, she looks more stoned surprised than angry. I think its with what the eyes are focused on. While the rest of the face and body language dictates anger, her eyes seem to be focused on something really far away. Im not an artist, so I cant say my opinion is well informed or experienced, but moving the pupils around some relative to each other, perhaps making them closer to make them look like they are focusing on something closer to her. And maybe down a bit? The only reason she looks stoned is because I know the object is closer, and lower than where her eyes appear to be looking.

posted by PossumFlavored on February 19th, 2015, 8:26 pm

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@PossumFlavored: Thank you, I'm happy to hear you enjoy the story. ^^

I'm always open for criticism so no worries! Canine expressions are a bit hard for me sometimes and they don't always turn out to be like I hoped. You don't have to be an artist to give some critic :) I will try to learn a bit more about expressions and concentrate more on them, thank you!

posted by darkerthandark on February 20th, 2015, 2:09 am

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